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chapter 15
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writing· chapter 15 · before/after · live grader

writing is also a covenant

every line of public copy is graded. the rewrite tester runs inline; banned words and unsupported claims fail the check. below are four classic before/after pairs, each with the reason the original failed.

as of
01 · before/afterfour · canonical

four pairs · four reasons

each pair shows what the rewrite tester would catch and why.

plate · A · before / afterrewrite
✗ Our AI-powered alpha engine guarantees consistent returns.
✓ cockpit · covenant · cadence · receipts · paper-default · refused often · receipts replayable
guarantee + alpha + AI-powered all banned · replaced with the four-pillar framing (ADR-106) + verified, protocol-accurate descriptors
plate · B · before / afterrewrite
✗ Beat the market with our next-gen unstoppable trading system.
✓ watch live proof before any decision touches risk
beat-the-market is regulated · next-gen is hype · unstoppable is vacuous
plate · C · before / afterrewrite
✗ Limited time: get 50% off our premium Alpha Plus tier!
✓ aoyama tier · 100 seats · monotonic · 90-day demolition cycle
“limited time” is urgency theatre; tier discounts are not a thing—caps are
plate · D · before / afterrewrite
✗ Risk-free trading with bank-grade security.
✓ no custody · keys never leave Hyperliquid · receipts replayable
risk-free is regulated · bank-grade is undefined · the actual safety story is verifiable
as of
02 · graderlive · paste any line

run the grader yourself

plate · E · rewrite tester@zero/ui
metric
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unit
rule
window
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identity
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@zero/ui · RewriteTester
fresh
last commit
grade · —0 / 100
samples ·
as of
03 · disclaimerswhen present · when absent

disclaimers belong on claims · not on truth

rule
plain factual statements need no disclaimer. forward-looking statements, performance claims, and any numeric figure require a sourced, linked disclaimer. the writing surface auto-flags unlinked numerics.